试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
; n2 K, ^; Q5 o. ]. H, y如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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The Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
8 N: g. t. W* ~8 f- F. G2 @8 kWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
! E8 g/ |( l% Z0 U7 |) EBeside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
% s" D. [. t8 Z8 ZFluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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3 ^7 h8 H0 l) y: ?: P7 w& X2 YContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
& w! m1 M7 ~% P6 T- o) c/ @Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
% M% {& B  J* W+ ATossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
0 }! t% }3 q/ X8 GOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
# W" k# l8 ^! s! @0 ]# |; l  {A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
# ~/ m6 Y; ^& m7 b5 `What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
% J% g6 k8 P) w* L2 s- h; TWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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