试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

, w5 t7 K  Y/ `8 D/ D- R3 d! JThe Daffodils                         水仙
, g$ h+ Z2 `% p; h' [$ NI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
( R2 t4 M# v9 s2 e/ EThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
7 ?) y. d0 a9 K9 o# c0 |  dA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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5 a9 q& A% o! k( V6 tContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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: ?8 ?  A  E  u7 o7 K3 H+ w* K' }The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
# I- A' U! \+ A! vOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
  Z" e6 y2 h! Z7 PIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
4 Q, |* d1 p2 g& J- `: lWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
' L( b& t6 A2 s& x) QFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
1 W( [" o# Y8 r( Z8 J4 MThey flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
# J+ X4 p7 z* y9 o3 R& e% yWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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