试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
, b" o5 I4 x( F; z如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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The Daffodils                         水仙
$ u  P% h, G  v" M1 K& q2 s' p0 SI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
* q- x3 H! A. EWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
3 E/ }& ?4 v* w/ |% u8 U+ WBeside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
. E! K1 E6 U3 V5 J$ m/ h& ~Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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4 R7 Y% x3 i! ^, K7 ^( q$ \# }Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
3 s; K) i7 N. ?They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
5 H8 ^0 m: B8 {( sAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
  x2 S6 X  h$ `+ T( S! `A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
& A  T* e) D6 {5 G* Q+ ?5 hIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
( q" D3 q, O( W  sFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
) |: G3 m' |2 U* gWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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