试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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The Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
4 l& a3 r/ x$ _# }, S7 oA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
8 X1 Z2 n1 c' _$ W& J/ X9 \Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
. J" F& \# H% E# CFluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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  T' m( p3 p% q! ], y6 @" XContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
1 j& N( t& _  I7 AAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
/ d. w; y# @; E7 S5 c% g) `" }Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
2 v& ^7 \5 T, L+ S* k/ p# |7 zTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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& E9 C5 X  Z- f: `: p. N+ @. hThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
- }) K2 B; |- j( x1 _5 L* vOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
6 h1 R# k' P0 p! z* g4 qWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
+ C3 c8 m( B3 ^" m3 T7 d  m% R0 D& v2 \In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
* ~2 q) r3 P' o; J4 e( aWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
0 N# z! Q% O) C( B; V; D) d# vAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
% ^" P5 R9 C/ K* h' K6 JAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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