试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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$ G2 I0 r! V1 H! C* |The Daffodils                         水仙
& C, A6 w( L0 B! RI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
# U) `" X6 G6 N% V* }That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
4 z- v1 m4 |- w2 r+ O: A1 kFluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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9 U# L- f4 U' i6 V7 r% v' y' rContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
; d. A0 B, X4 r) p$ K+ [They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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2 l6 [. l& W( ]+ s( p1 f2 _The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
' J* C+ r+ a  \8 V1 h3 GOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
4 y) L6 F6 \. r6 B8 Q2 g9 HIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
9 g: P1 T0 f( [- mI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
3 B8 J3 q2 Y3 i. h( H  c, SThey flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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