试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

. r1 E( [( h& W9 `& z, u% BThe Daffodils                         水仙
0 n- N4 W7 C# B( QI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
, m2 D4 ^( i7 U/ b$ }: p" AWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
' ]+ W# Q7 m1 D' LA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
$ Y( p; y" q& i& g& z0 F3 w0 W3 \Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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' }) l1 {7 Y" m9 ]: {8 GContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
/ N: [( I' L9 X3 eThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
" i* e0 I3 O8 c5 W/ B0 V# yAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
4 s0 S( o: @/ E8 k9 M) c  uA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
9 e; M  y! Q+ T: f% qI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
7 Y+ t9 W8 W' z7 Z1 c0 X6 A9 z3 tWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
8 i& m1 |9 W4 w% C" [3 ~9 DThey flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
3 V8 @' @0 h& P- `: f+ KAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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