试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
( x# r2 J( W7 [0 ~# m+ A如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

The Daffodils                         水仙
! R3 t% s1 w# |6 M+ D; mI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
; Y. c$ g& T5 A; b4 m& U: h" X% a7 _When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
3 `  U# c/ F/ D$ P  {Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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" H; Q  \+ y' f9 Y' ]% N6 [Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
/ Y# T  w6 q, [* r' {Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
6 R9 _* k" J" W* U2 vTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
% j0 j( M2 D9 \Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
" \8 ?8 ]2 n6 ]. IA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
5 E3 V* E8 H! Q: J0 c$ I* U1 y- zFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
/ m5 V+ z2 t9 G" ?$ W6 c6 DIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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