试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

8 p4 T! s0 q5 FThe Daffodils                         水仙
( Q* I+ X9 u( T! x, kI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
8 `( \$ a$ h& X0 \7 c* FWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
( x5 ]7 ^$ B4 SA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
; Y  V" K4 z4 j1 OFluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
8 ^/ P% k. n2 y/ B3 VTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
/ `; t3 M" @- g. _; o% H3 z/ W# `3 C+ oTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

2 h3 Q4 x5 c" ?, T; g* DThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
1 Q5 L0 @; H  ^" S/ X& fA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
# Y+ v! T" l3 m2 @+ OI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
0 u( K+ \7 }( @What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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