试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
& m) a# W1 I( B  O, A如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

The Daffodils                         水仙
/ t2 a  C1 |8 g8 l% a5 SI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
" o  u1 a0 k" K9 m: p# J2 DThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
) U. E3 x, a+ i/ R- H1 U7 s/ T1 JWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
6 I! B0 c, |9 B2 V9 k7 O* nA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

# k% R# f; \+ dContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
2 V) D) |5 T. f* m7 c% h! UAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
* E! e; @1 X8 K* ^( I& NTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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5 w, D. o0 @. hThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
6 m0 S2 H3 h0 L; X' N. [) P& LOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
0 @5 |" t# |. t/ l% t7 R% `) _2 NA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
$ H5 a+ t! N) ]$ O8 O( D! f- UIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
- e& ^1 Q3 P; ~I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
' x1 q& N+ \& k- ]1 p8 ?. XWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
* y1 E' d! A: K) C5 e: `$ aFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
+ e* b% g3 |" m8 wIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
% f7 w+ @/ [8 r7 iAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
3 p1 d: e( G7 r4 }And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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