试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
. ]# _+ g3 a5 F8 L如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

The Daffodils                         水仙
: G1 r, H/ p* I% \6 A! b4 _I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
3 c9 n' g+ k3 w) I1 M7 k* u+ c5 P7 RThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
# b6 w& A& m/ K4 X3 ?, bWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
* }% K! _" L4 r* ^  Y- P! rA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
6 W; t5 X: s/ p1 Q1 UFluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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% Q: }& [% b) O! m7 Q; d8 m: s1 PContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
  N' a  g& S: e) pAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
: G8 W0 T9 m* E+ ]" S( V5 QOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
- Z/ c+ |5 M/ b! uA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
/ D' @0 P1 B7 n# MIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
, l7 ~" Z+ g3 s6 g+ m( x% fWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
/ x( w; K9 g0 c$ Y5 u. kFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
$ l, Q% m/ y. K% ]7 p& p) U7 R; h& pAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
5 q7 V/ G, E4 W+ F3 b4 h9 [# wAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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