试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
# J! ~1 S7 {0 R, v1 S* L如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

* b9 |" A2 r- w. D% d. EThe Daffodils                         水仙
6 i: L1 A2 w: A5 R5 T) FI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
* N5 y9 N7 \' Y, v/ v7 U, v. BWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
' @3 l. ~* W$ b8 C5 ?2 ?* yA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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8 {2 r% V* X1 I; e' U. s2 C- q# PContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
- D) V  @- L5 d0 j$ ~' fAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
$ K# b0 l: C" m1 e$ A+ {5 _Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
) X" E% S3 ?, s+ N$ C! \Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
$ N; G' \  k. Q- fTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

, n& _3 Q8 |7 j; k2 p  C9 M8 I+ Q5 cThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
: y2 `! t( {& U: [1 GOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
# g8 O* a8 a- j$ vI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
9 V" J1 a% I9 @  j) C# ?What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
( S9 b2 A" N0 `+ ~0 I3 {For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
2 ?! E6 {2 o: p! V* qThey flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
8 o! I1 }7 D7 I* q( rAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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