试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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The Daffodils                         水仙
, W6 I# Y# z# z1 r: fI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
  b1 C0 [1 z/ L) z' ?When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
( j9 E5 Q& n3 r% A$ j4 s" uA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
- A' P6 O% b: O: B8 d. P. ]7 ZThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
" y2 I; s; X, o7 S. M& k9 kTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
, X9 A% R) ?. j# m3 L8 y" ]5 QA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
$ E. |2 k) Z- u$ o- T* I3 e/ r, xIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
7 ]$ ^4 Q2 \8 H  V. H% bI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
. c, z5 k* x( \1 R4 @4 [0 G1 E! xWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
4 T' d0 B- b* hFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
2 E- t8 D; y. K0 S, w4 NAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
+ J8 g0 F$ M1 o& i# j/ OAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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