试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

The Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
5 r0 L+ E1 ^0 y; Y. {0 CBeside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
/ C, A6 W" L6 k2 B2 o, h' JAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
8 ^0 x4 J- T2 P/ P6 rTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
" h' G! t2 q1 hTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

" f$ A! M0 b- l5 HThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
8 S: X* b' x- d4 v0 Y4 q+ I/ CI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
1 S' e/ L( \/ s# Y8 D: t* {In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
7 z" x) J  `, o4 z2 h* Q' E  y2 bWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
! `+ k& }8 C6 _3 vAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
) `; Q$ G& X6 {6 M+ bAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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