试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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! W) P$ M% m2 A+ Q5 e1 `! a9 FThe Daffodils                         水仙
2 [& s& R9 u. a9 x8 ~6 d/ ?# TI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

! O+ X. @5 g4 V7 R8 o& D2 l, gContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
6 M! w" V) P: mAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
7 h2 W. O- y! k4 l' D1 XAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
) @) @( K% x; s8 H/ |: v- ^Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
9 y# y" S! W5 I7 e' ^6 Y2 p+ IIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
1 P: V0 z' \5 @4 c+ u: `For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
  C" N. a, Z4 {5 t$ q$ [6 P! }In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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