试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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( s6 g) s- j0 L2 _8 @) S0 kThe Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
0 S+ e9 ], h. C% s+ JA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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6 e$ C1 m; L' a( E4 sContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
" [  R9 L7 j* C: oAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
3 a  a7 H% n6 z% I" u3 ?8 h. iTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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  n+ i5 B" A0 b0 R; m: Y: @1 WThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
0 G1 O3 \1 H- Z7 w+ l4 M1 s% bA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
+ ~# `# q" T4 K$ ]& xWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
5 X8 n  n& `# K* s% \. R3 FFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
) z+ y+ G. G9 R3 ^0 WThey flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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