试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
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The Daffodils                         水仙
5 r9 s% d  d2 x/ o& v) @0 \5 MI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
1 j5 k" s$ @$ F) zThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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( f0 w1 v/ R3 j; w6 v; wContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
, {' j6 d# ~0 `And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
3 S" L  W4 ]2 I2 fThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

/ j3 W  J3 R6 uThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
. i1 K5 _  h! p* y" V* yA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
; |) b; [$ f$ y  W% N8 TIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
5 E( p8 N- r6 B% ^  h6 m- XI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
. ~6 G3 P, t( [" d2 _6 RWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
8 i; _; E' u: x' H6 \  E4 IIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
# W0 A$ M2 w, r% PWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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