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试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

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发表于 2006-12-29 20:13:23 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
翻译的不好,不要笑我啦,呵呵,我也是在练习而已::17::
* ~+ n" x. i- R. \+ I如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足,就更加万分感谢啦!
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The Daffodils                         水仙
8 d! r  b( u  C; t9 g2 o1 S5 mI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
* `+ @' P$ x* t7 QThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠9 j4 a2 l* v+ c) i
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
6 l' w$ P" g* E+ c( Q. xA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙: a" i! g/ ]# `9 H' n
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上,树荫下,微风中( l0 I+ j7 J8 _6 N! }$ `6 s- f
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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: ?, P7 Q+ n9 i7 a, gContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星. ~1 m; Q7 [2 X7 a
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛# _/ o" W3 b' G, f, o" ]" `
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生, g) p- D5 t- X; _0 O
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际  F  ]% ~: C3 I3 B4 S: d9 Z
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去,满目金蕊
/ O4 ~+ Z" k: N8 B4 [  _Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞,香颈轻摇3 C, o8 F7 p0 q9 I! S
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The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞0 r2 t9 e3 j5 y8 d0 R
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
. `( l3 d9 @& j% FA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人+ D6 h5 d/ e; _
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情  u1 Z1 t$ z$ L0 o: p" P
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着,看着,我已忘乎所以
" _/ X. h0 V  d' h& e! Z2 @+ wWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我,能抵万金!6 i* ?0 l1 j" ]6 q9 r  g: c- ^0 k* `
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处; d0 |+ u) y' C& E( [
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪! ?! G0 H* M3 r: i, a7 Z: z- G4 G
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现7 S2 D7 p' h) o% j
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。: v6 b3 n# v. R' S' j7 o  R
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦$ ~( B+ D+ z& b% W/ e
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起0 X7 s* }+ R5 R0 ^$ u0 h

/ H* y3 v4 t% H* N, q9 w, e& y8 w[ 本帖最后由 阿猫阿狗 于 2006-12-30 10:09 编辑 ]
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