试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
- R6 V3 |1 S* a# S" m) j如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

' k0 f) m# A9 Y0 y) @, NThe Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
& [' b& z) o/ }; ?That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
6 q* P  I% g3 F; |$ f# YWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
* j& W5 K* d. FBeside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
& g, Y# m4 C. [Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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) K* {/ ^- M  H4 _4 OContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
' e$ R1 l9 J7 D9 Q$ V% f/ n! ]And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
' K1 A; h! F  GTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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% _3 v- L$ h! }; G; s9 s7 dThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
8 Z. k- R( B/ f+ ]% `& n( OOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
* }# k' x, C9 V* l& {. @" m1 y# k: sI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
- A8 C5 `% p! r7 u0 mIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
* ^$ ~- x% V- a  E( OAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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