试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

( ?' d* ?0 P. zThe Daffodils                         水仙
6 x9 s, X: ?8 e* J- W' Z& e2 }$ oI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
+ r8 `( {" r: l' e9 D# h! U+ |That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
2 j6 c+ `; m+ j; m" BA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
2 [8 k5 {$ S% D: m- Y7 OAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
. e" f" `* R( Z, O  H; Y; A2 c, m: zAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
9 }* c- ^' x. w1 g$ dOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
3 M( }9 D9 P, \( ^( G. q) k0 nA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
3 d# K* a! o; R7 {1 B; x% |I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
; D2 e7 q$ x* HThey flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
; p2 g+ B0 g* a8 RWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
$ R9 n7 }4 C& a4 {7 _/ O  K- R, i: |And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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