试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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! S; H" f  p4 Y4 rThe Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
2 v$ ~- J3 B( N. OThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
! K* U& b; W0 ?: Z4 T* XWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
  [- M! W, q2 G* A# WFluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
( I8 T6 a; Z4 s* u& B% G2 ^Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

* M) V4 u! P6 @( r+ k, y! |The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
9 ^, _4 F$ K$ m/ k4 ~4 W4 ]In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
7 ^! K) V  i  X& W  D0 _They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
% W/ H; J8 m4 E1 YAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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