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试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

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发表于 2006-12-29 20:13:23 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
翻译的不好,不要笑我啦,呵呵,我也是在练习而已::17::
" D% ?6 s% ~* Y, p0 b如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足,就更加万分感谢啦!
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; j6 Y3 m& A$ I! Y7 a) LThe Daffodils                         水仙
+ V/ z) I- \4 l  O3 R9 f6 M' UI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
* q3 |5 K/ q; Y- V1 h4 i) u. RThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠, {3 M, j( Q- ^
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
0 o  P: `3 H; M+ \4 KA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙$ \+ c" c: @; y1 {
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上,树荫下,微风中  m% h  B4 x2 H2 w7 q7 w
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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( q. i. V" P2 f" s% _Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星; t) I, v! D3 C& q* v4 s
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
) M/ k( N! m4 q  j# J1 E2 uThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
; X+ |: ?  S, e4 z" xAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
" v" A! J! a& I4 H1 eTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去,满目金蕊
; h& U& w1 f5 g: RTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞,香颈轻摇
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; P; M( Z  c; V4 u, D: ^: hThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞& D$ p% l' E8 v
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步5 R- B+ l1 R% ~, a
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人$ U' a$ Y  W0 x5 C# t- \) J
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情+ n1 F: l' R. V/ q% Y4 u+ X
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着,看着,我已忘乎所以
5 a6 @+ C  m- Q% l) K* ^0 y! N( SWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我,能抵万金!
8 P$ z7 M3 G6 Y& [; h# [' UFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
9 U$ V0 x5 J$ |) O, J1 rIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
6 M7 w, a% P3 H. w6 E9 `0 H4 CThey flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现* A% J# i( X, s' K, B
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。5 x. |# X; v& P( B9 O
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦8 j8 I& B  W6 q! C
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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