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试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

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发表于 2006-12-29 20:13:23 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
翻译的不好,不要笑我啦,呵呵,我也是在练习而已::17:: , Z7 S7 D6 ~5 @, |4 n0 |  n! H9 P
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足,就更加万分感谢啦!
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The Daffodils                         水仙
% F- @$ h. L; b; G7 `I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
/ T/ u3 T% R9 [0 A* ]+ ^" ZThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠* i7 x' ?) z& `4 k* d# j) M% H
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
% ?/ w+ \" E+ u& ]% X) }+ P2 |1 [" NA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙% |7 A+ M) v( m: l6 q) [
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上,树荫下,微风中+ P% z4 i( u( ~8 A! H# W
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩- @% J0 q7 i: Q9 Y! L/ s

/ Y) c6 U3 x' D$ x; \' PContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
2 U! D7 K7 \6 _( qAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
7 P; m( l- K) y9 r1 w# ~They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生+ d6 }, c, T/ c* n2 Q9 W6 b6 ?& w
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
. U& t- @: t; z, n% q+ `+ J( FTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去,满目金蕊
+ p  v8 q0 [( V* F4 w1 V6 PTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞,香颈轻摇% I; [9 a! ]9 a& K6 Y# k1 W9 X: @
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The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞  D3 P. Z9 Y+ C
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步# o0 i& S* g$ Q# I) c- x
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
% r8 B5 P5 y5 r5 h8 BIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
4 j2 j# D% A* fI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着,看着,我已忘乎所以
" a$ [' j& i! `+ a& o) {What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我,能抵万金!# O, T" F& a( B! _, J9 q2 n
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
, i8 z* ]' W' Y2 wIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪2 _+ U* j* V1 V. ^
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
- o6 g0 D  w! O* ~' QWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
8 Y# y: ~( v* u5 VAnd then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦% ?! ^4 J; J+ ?1 [9 f# @
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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