试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
! e5 \* P: v. T* C5 I# r如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

  P- y+ v3 A- G+ a* B$ S: r8 SThe Daffodils                         水仙
; c8 M. h% b( JI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
) f' K2 [* E! C& r$ xThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
6 X7 Z& J- {" B6 O$ Z7 |Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

- \- w. U" _5 g5 pContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
/ d* W7 x5 f6 o7 w" i, yThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
' e! h- f8 u8 F% oAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
3 y4 r& W' Q' \8 r5 R9 tTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇
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: a+ P3 w% e/ p, N& K4 c+ y/ b/ PThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
! s# Y3 U, r' \+ u/ }7 SIn such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
; ^4 ^' I+ E8 m5 N) Q( x! z0 jWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
# B; J+ d* l* ]' L! `Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
: p; {/ g# M" aAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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