试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

6 ^5 x" L7 [, \& W# T: jThe Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
* p5 T1 ]0 \6 h( m9 a* c; ^When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
( }. M$ i' H" u5 eA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
) P3 F, h+ b4 DTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
6 K' n% F6 k" g, YTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
; I0 O% r; V. l  r( X7 iA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
7 w5 U8 g, E3 L: z+ @3 P8 I2 EI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
! S! f, O% ^- ?! D* dWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
) H0 _! Q- C& g% g" R2 y$ YWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
$ X/ s; [/ k# |& Q7 G. _And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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