试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
* _( e" y) J% H5 ]; B如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

' n# ^6 Z, e3 j0 Q5 s+ N6 G3 XThe Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
1 B5 U6 w) @( x( VThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
. z# |- {1 j& O7 ?When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
( Z' a4 N! U) r+ Q( r  R$ S2 G& m0 PA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
3 p* R: |+ |4 n( I8 i7 }Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

* O  ?+ q& m- g3 D# u$ yContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
) ?% S. u/ `% u: I6 iThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
! ^8 `, K4 ^- K- L1 J3 KTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
1 B0 o7 b/ ~9 n6 q; S, FTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
( F" y3 ]2 M" f2 _+ oWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
6 f( O7 T2 z: ^, ?In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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