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试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

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发表于 2006-12-29 20:13:23 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
翻译的不好,不要笑我啦,呵呵,我也是在练习而已::17::
, c4 X3 o7 `" z& r* E! I如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足,就更加万分感谢啦!% U- ^- @: `5 r2 F4 I

$ u8 J" n* }4 P0 h) l, MThe Daffodils                         水仙
1 j9 o; ]; V# Y* {" n( T5 OI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
8 ^. }" a0 s. r6 M2 J  p( w( g2 _  ZThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
" D% i+ ?4 Z  C+ H1 w; {When all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
8 o1 Q, F- W& [! i* \; _A host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
( W: [5 j4 d8 RBeside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上,树荫下,微风中8 \. `; i: F' _% Z
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
6 J- J( i. D) QAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
, t( |4 B) r+ Q, p$ U  pThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
1 b. P1 z. K8 a4 S0 [5 NAmong the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
6 x8 d  n8 |+ @$ a/ _Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去,满目金蕊
% k$ \5 i2 B& R" F; B& @& CTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞,香颈轻摇  G( B$ K: R: _; s  Z
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The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
1 E/ K) ?: c0 k) Y6 {2 g8 gOutdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
9 f: T- ?. \6 j. _8 N* z9 FA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人/ V% x7 ?* I6 [7 E
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
2 ?+ ~, G. N" gI gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着,看着,我已忘乎所以
0 d* h  P& c$ H9 j1 o% vWhat wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我,能抵万金!0 p( `, ?+ _0 k# F; `1 x
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处8 ~& c1 Y6 ]2 U% j% r8 W
In vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪8 p2 n8 E9 D+ Z8 d
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现9 s( W- v- l5 V8 V. u
Which is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。$ E' u, F9 x4 [$ a4 ^& |7 b% U
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
- Q2 |" [( y, _$ W4 C: UAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起2 N" {# ]- q  W2 l7 T0 v7 Z
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