试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
7 M# P) r" h, K& g如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！
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The Daffodils                         水仙
. x' w3 s2 l, p: T+ m* DI wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
That floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
& d' f# {2 w9 v& M7 TWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
: [2 A4 q7 @$ w! h" K. B/ d# G9 F7 dA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
3 g( T2 `" ?* m0 |( F  c% M$ G$ oBeside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩

% x. t0 ?- t0 M8 DContinuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
And twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
They stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
( l( k( S6 W" j, K/ NTossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

7 r' k# p5 u( X. u: V. UThe waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
A poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
# j6 R8 p; g9 wFor oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
3 d2 y; A' R/ C% h7 n$ [! fIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
/ H2 `: a% a) e  u1 WWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
9 w( x4 u( ^! [& _9 O1 AAnd dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起
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