试着翻译了一下“The Daffodils”——《水仙》

阿猫阿狗

翻译的不好，不要笑我啦，呵呵，我也是在练习而已::17::
- s7 O4 Z: `( p) ?0 s8 S2 x如果能帮小弟指出错误和不足，就更加万分感谢啦！

The Daffodils                         水仙
I wandered lonely as a cloud               仿佛一片孤独的云
( C# x) J0 D, o2 m" e: x" R/ rThat floats in high o’er vales and hills,我徜徉在山谷之颠
" P& }, Z5 N5 F- J* g  rWhen all at once I saw a crowd,         无意间窥见了那一片
. J% x% H; c7 RA host of golden daffodils;                   葱郁的黄水仙
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,    湖岸上，树荫下，微风中
0 x/ J4 p, `8 m) FFluttering and dancing in the breeze.     摇曳着舞姿翩翩
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Continuous as the stars that shine          花朵好似繁星
8 R: {* N/ C" C( qAnd twinkle on the Milky Way,             在银河里眨着眼睛
8 W3 ~! W8 ]( x- d0 K4 U% vThey stretched in never-ending line        花丛簇拥湖湾而生
Among the margin of a bay:                   延绵直到天际
% C( [% |# `  G5 yTen thousand saw I at a glance,             一眼望去，满目金蕊
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.    欢歌曼舞，香颈轻摇

The waves beside them danced; but they 湖中粼粼的涟漪也来跳舞
Outdid the sparking waves in glee:           比不过仙子们欢快的舞步
5 D- c: B+ |+ p1 E/ X- zA poet could not but be gay,                    仙子陪伴着诗人
In such a jocund company:                       叫我怎能不为之纵情
I gazed ---and gazed--- but little thought  看着，看着，我已忘乎所以
What wealth the show to me had brought: 此景于我，能抵万金！
For oft, when on my couch I lie                每每悠闲独处
* E9 Y$ Z6 w, M- c! b. z8 DIn vacant or in pensive mood,                   脑海填满茫然的思绪
They flash upon that inward eye                深邃的眸子又会闪现
! D7 b, |8 o* b8 m, hWhich is the bliss of solitude;                    那寂寞福音般美妙的情景。
And then my heart with pleasure fills,         我便满心喜悦
And dances with the daffodils.                   与水仙舞在一起

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